2nd day of re visiting drawing cartoons

Mini

Scrapped main character monologue that I didn’t like

I really not living the easiest, normal life everyone experiences since birth, Im just really lonely all the time

I get it that my Dad is rich and he bought a expensive giant house with butlers and private chefs BUT I really don’t care what he has or does, I just want to live with a normal Dad The thing about my Dad is he is a superhero in theoretical ways… you might be thinking well then Zac why cry about your Dad when he’s a Dad of child dreams! sadly the truth is people with unnatural powers don’t get respected as the ones we see in movies and comic books. My Dad is pretty much just a weopen used by the American government for assassinations and war, he’s just a unique soldier in their eyes they really don’t care about him at all, he’s always gone doing his job in far away countries and never has time to ever visit me and when he does he’s only around for about a week then he’s gone for another few months, I never got to know him at all.

My Mom has been dead since I was 3, she died in a plane crash and that’s about everything I know about her apart from pictures in family journals which to be honest are just emptyl

No one in my neighbourhood knows who I am or who I’m related to, my Dad made sure to leave my life private from others so I can live the most normal life a person like me can have…

Working on the characters…

My rough story premise so far- (it’s a rough text and not the actual story)

-Main character born in rich family with a dad with unnatural powers and the government use him as a weapon for war and secret assassinations which they pay a lot for making him quite rich

-Main character never had time to spend with his dad since he spent time protecting the country and his mom died when he was 12 in a plane crash

-Main character gets into a relationship with a girl who hides herself from people

-Main character gets voices in his head from a mysterious voice who tells him how his mom actually died which was that his dad locked her far away far from reach of any person

-The voices tell the main character that he has the same powers his dad has threw DNA and he knew how to teach him to control these powers by finding journals and writings of his dad when he was young and developing his intelligence with his powers and threw anger the main character chose to listen to him

-So when the main characters dad was gone for a couple of weeks with his job the main character uses that time with the guidance of the voice to sneak into his dads secret belongings to learn how he learnt to unlock and control his powers , he also trusts his GF to help him with it which she found stupid but wanted to join with

-Then the voice shows himself as a crow

-The voice then shows him books and teaches the main character to fight, defend and use his powers as advantages

-The main character is done training and his next goal threw guidance of the voice is to kill his dad He fights his dad when he was out of guard and he was losing and then the voice sends a mysterious powerful character who hides her face with a mask to assist him and they kill his dad

-The mysterious character and the voice turn on the main character and turn out to be using him and the mysterious character does this witch craft to allow the voice to posses the main characters dad They leave the main character stuck by collapsing his house

-He survives and runs away from his house

-He goes to his gf house but she doesn’t seem to be in so he goes to his friends tarkins house, tarkins mom is a doctor so she could help him cure and they hide from the police

-The main character goes on a hunt to find the mysterious character and the voice, he sees on the news that their were attacks on museums in near by city’s counting his, he chooses to go to one that hasn’t been attacked and waited for the voice and the mysterious character

-They arrive but the voice is bigger then when the main character first saw him

-They seem to be searching for a ancient coffin of the god Khonsu for his staff and they were looking for the location of the tomb of Khonsu threw museum knowledge

-The main character chooses to not pounce out but to just listen and ran out

-He chooses to try to find the tomb before the voice

-He goes to his grandads house who spent his whole life adventuring threw history of Egyptian gods especially Khonsu and then the main character learns that his dad used to go adventuring with him and they were adventuring the tomb of Khonsu and reosen the main characters dad has powers was cause he was cursed but instead of letting it harm him he used it

-The main characters grandad knew the location to the tomb but before he could say it the mysterious character came for the grandad but the main characters fought, he kicked the mask of the mysterious character to reveal that she was his gf and in shock lost his control in the fight and got beaten, his gf took his grandad —

How I make up characters

I hate making characters up from scratch, to be honest its harder then it looks to think of a new character to work from straight from the bottom of my imagination I usually get ideas from the personalitys of friends and people I have met during my life to build up characters I would enjoy to work from, It makes the character feel more personal but thats just my opinion on how I enjoy to make characters